picture me: a poem

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Tuesday, 10-Jun-2008 14:12:12

this is the second poem I've written today, it's like I can't turn it off. Enjoy and reply.
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Picture me.

Paint me with your water colours,
Show me what you see.
Draw my sole upon your canvas,
Make my spirit free.
I used to think I would mar your beauty,
Only scar your pristine grace.
Now I see that you illuminate me,
I’m in my rightful place.
I am your creation,
A stain on your page.
I wish to bathe in your illustration,
Fill the life of your frame.

Post 2 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Tuesday, 01-Jul-2008 15:23:49

Nice, I like your poem. It implies a lot of ideas. Good job on this one. I like the way you wrote it, it was simple yet direct to what you wanted to say. You got the picture all together. Good choice of title.

Post 3 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Tuesday, 08-Jul-2008 21:06:00

Dude I so love your writing girl. Great job

Post 4 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Wednesday, 09-Jul-2008 10:41:37

Thank you both.